Can someone listen to my audition for me please? Tell me what you think? Critique it?

I%26#039;m going to audition for the musical at school soon. Can someone please listen to this audition peice I prepared and tell me what you think?





http://youtube.com/watch?v=cv4LtwivAis





I%26#039;d really appreciate advice or comments. Thank you!
Can someone listen to my audition for me please? Tell me what you think? Critique it?
wow, i thought that u were really good
Can someone listen to my audition for me please? Tell me what you think? Critique it?
that was really good =] my only advice is to just make sure to support from your diaphragm, open your mouth, and just let it flow all in one motion. it sounded great :D
Reply:i wish i could sing like u :[
Reply:constructive criticism;


1. keep your vowels %26amp; throat open on the upper notes


2. use greater dynamic contrast





compliments;


great tone


excellent vibrato


good support


phrasing %26amp; diction very clear
Reply:Wow, you have a nice, delicate yet strong voice, well done :)





My only suggestions would be to gather more air and breath and support from your diaphragm, make sure your whole body is relaxed, especially for the audition, try and create a sound and feeling that reflects you and adds a little bit of your own spice and tone. Also try to listen to yourself to produce a better full, clearer, pure sound - and keep that vibrato up, it`s very lovely!





It was beautiful, keep it up and good luck at your auditions!
Reply:u were gr8 here are a few tips





it sounds a little bit nasal, so try to stay away from dairy: like cheese milk. Drink soy milk


and maybe you need a little more space. imagine (when you%26#039;re warming up) that you have an orange stuck in your throat. this will cause you to open your throat a little bit.


other than that nice tone.